Attention all young boys a girls, I now present to you the athlete Eris. Eris's admires sports but on the side of sports, nobody knows that Eris likes to fly kites. A lot of people do not know when kites where created but Eris does. Eris believes that kites were invented by Chinese general Han Hsin (206 B.C- 220 A.D). During one military campaign, the general was said to have a kite flown above a besieged town to calculate the army. Well that's all we have for now, tune in for more blogs by Eris
Friday, June 13, 2014
A History Of Kites By Eris
Attention all young boys a girls, I now present to you the athlete Eris. Eris's admires sports but on the side of sports, nobody knows that Eris likes to fly kites. A lot of people do not know when kites where created but Eris does. Eris believes that kites were invented by Chinese general Han Hsin (206 B.C- 220 A.D). During one military campaign, the general was said to have a kite flown above a besieged town to calculate the army. Well that's all we have for now, tune in for more blogs by Eris
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I think the history of kites is a very interesting topic, however, I felt like you didn't really share much information that you learned about the history of kites. Kites have impacted many other cultures besides Ancient China. I as the reader am left wanting more information. Plus, you use an exact sentence from the text I gave you, yet you didn't make it a direct quote and tell the reader where you found the information from. Without doing that, you have committed plagiarism. Go back and fix that immediately please.
ReplyDeleteVery good but don't use evidence from the book.
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